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diff --git a/logseq/version-files/base/pages/make it real.md b/logseq/version-files/base/pages/make it real.md
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+tags:: #life #pillar
+
+- **prev:**
+-
+- **next:**
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diff --git a/logseq/version-files/base/pages/second brain.md b/logseq/version-files/base/pages/second brain.md
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@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 tags:: #[[personal knowledge management]] #zettlekasten #knowledge #meta #life
 
 - **prev:** [[personal knowledge management]]
-- second brain is a shorthand phrase that goes over
+- second brain is a shorthand phrase for your own personal system of note-taking that lives outside of your own head. it is committed information down outside of you that becomes easier to manipulate because you've put it down. you've [made it real]([[make it real]]).
 - ### further reading
 	- tiago forte has really good videos on how to manage your second brain. he even wrote a book on it! i haven't read it myself, but his videos are really good.
 		- {{video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3dDVtJ2sec}}
diff --git a/pages/make it real.md b/pages/make it real.md
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+tags:: #life #pillar
+
+- **prev:**
+-
+- **next:**
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--- a/pages/second brain.md	
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 tags:: #[[personal knowledge management]] #zettlekasten #knowledge #meta #life
 
 - **prev:** [[personal knowledge management]]
-- second brain is a shorthand phrase for your own personal system of note-taking that lives outside of your own head. it is c
+- second brain is a shorthand phrase for your own personal system of note-taking that lives outside of your own head. it is committed information down outside of you that becomes easier to manipulate because you've put it down. you've [made it real]([[make it real]]).
 - ### further reading
 	- tiago forte has really good videos on how to manage your second brain. he even wrote a book on it! i haven't read it myself, but his videos are really good.
 		- {{video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3dDVtJ2sec}}